Perfect piece of art!! You even got the expressions to be so PERFECT... Marceline concentrating, Jake and Bubblegum being amused, Finn blushing at the thought of Marceline aka Marshall Lee trying to trick Fionna/Finn to admitting his/her love, and Ice King being the Ice King, a bit peeved at the thought of his fanfics being written differently.
what the heck finn ur reading it and hey think about it maybe shes making the story like that because she likes u i dont no but hey maybe she just likes to do awsome fanfics like IK
Marcy: Oh yeah
Jake: Whoo!
PB: Funny
Finn: WHAT THE GLOB
Well done!!
Great job! This looks awesome. ^^